Welcome back to Write On. I hope you had a fabulous holiday and enjoyed some fun and interesting activities.
Today we celebrated the holidays and things we did in them.
Our activity was to write a review on something we did in the holidays and what we enjoyed about it.
We had to explain where we went and who we went with. Finally we finished by explaining whether we would recommend this place or activity to others and why.
Here is some writing from today's superstar writers :-)
In the holidays I went to Palmerston North. I enjoyed the beach. I went there with my family. I recommend to go to The Beach Side Cafe because it has good fries. I stayed at my cousins house. I hope you like Palmerston North.
By Dima
I went to the movies at Chartwell to watch Transformers. I enjoyed eating lots of food.
I went with my sister, my sisters friend and my brother.
I recommend watching this movie because its full of action and its got good fighting scenes at the end.
And the seats at the movies are comfy. And sneaking your own food in there because they don't have the good food that you get.
By Braydyn
In the school holidays I went to Palmerston North and me my mum and dad went there. I recommend that if you go there you should stay in a flash hotel. And shop in the mall called The Plasma. You have curry there because they have wonderful curry.
Also if you stay at a flash hotel make sure they have a spa.
Its a 5 hour drive make sure you stop every hour and go toilet.
So make sure you rock on down!
By Lily
In the holidays I went to Wellington with Tierney to stay with dad. We were there for a whole week.
While we were there we went to the pools in Wellington and I went on the bouncy thing a lot.
On Friday I went to Ricks place so we could roast marshmallows and watch a movie called The Lego Movie. We also had scrambled eggs with bacon and cheese on Saturday.
I think you should go to Wellington because it has lots of great places to see.
By Keegan
